That's really great...I can't wait to read some more by others in the class. I like the way you have made it rhyme and the illustrations you chose are beautiful.
Imaginative and very well constructed! I loved it keep writing.
What a brilliant idea for story writing and a fantastic poem too! Well done Janie!
Dear Mrs R, Thank you for reading my story/poem. I hope you are having a nice holiday. Janie
Lovely story Janie - you are a very talented writer! Lots of love Nao (Ella's Aunty!) x
Your story is lovely....the descriptive language that you have used helps me to see your story inside of my head!
I'm very excited for your class to begin blogging with my class here in Canada! Keep writing, you are a true author!
From, Mrs. Muller in Canada
Thank you Mrs.Muller! I can't wait for our classes to link up either.
You made that, Janie? Incredible! I love your writing as well as the images, and I wonder how you put it together. I am not very good at that kind of stuff yet, so maybe you could show me some time? :)
Thank you. I wrote it on a brilliant website called Storybird. Try it and let me know what you called it and I will read it!
I liked it.
I liked it mostly because It rimmed.
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